七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Yesterday Sam got up at six o'clock.Then he rode bike to park.He played happily in the park.After lunch with father and mother in McDonald' s.Sam and his classmates play basketball in the afternoon.They play basketball till six o'clock.After dinner Sam go for walk with his father.His father bought a music CD for him.What an interested day is!