七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Yesterday Sam got up at six o'clock.Then he rode bike to park.He played happily in the park.At noon he had lunch in McDonald' s with his parents.Sam and his classmates play basketball in the afternoon.They play basketball till six o'clock.After dinner Sam went for walk with his father.His father bought a music CD for him.What an interesting day is!