甘肃武威六中2013届高三第二次模拟试卷英语作文

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At present,Internet Slang,such as “GG,MM,Xia Mi”，has become popular among the teenagers. there are two different viewpoints, some people think that internet Slang is vivid and fashion. it is very convenience when we are charting with others in internet. on the other hand, the internet Slang is more humor and intelligence. however, other people are for that internet Slang is lack of thought.it is not accepted and understand by most of people. if we used it too much, which will lead to misunderstand and incomprehension. in my oppions, internet Slang is the represent of fashion and progress in the development of society. but I think we should use it appropriate.such as charting with other in the entertainment public or internet.