2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦38:失物招领启事

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My friend,Jeff A beautiful girl named Jeff is my best friend,she is come from America.She has a blue eyes and silm finger.in a word,she looked so pretty! The summer is coming,Jeff make a plan that She will travel the south of china by train.during the time,she will taste the best food in the local.