七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中从句过少；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，另外文中有较多拼写错误；结构不严谨，行文不流畅；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

Sam geted up at six yesterday . Then by bike to park,he have fun in park.in afternoon and parents in McDONalds eated lunch . Afternoon Sam and his claaamates played basketball at school,From 4.00p.m till 6.00P.M..After dinnar,Sam and father go for a walk ,father buy a music CD to him.This Sam have fun