福建长汀四中2012-2013学年七年级上学期期中试卷英语作文附范文

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

I understand my monitor after half year. His name is Ben Li. He is ten years old.He looks like his father. He like wearing green T-shirt and black knickers. He like playing football and basketball. I am his good friend.I always play with him.And he is friendly. He always help me.