七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；从句使用不熟练；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Sam's one day Yesterday,Sam got up at six o'clock.Then he rode a bike to park.He had a good time in the park .At noon,he had lunch at McDonald’s with his parents.In the afternoon,he played basketball at school from four till six with his classmate. After dinner ,Sam went for a walk with his father .And his father bought a music CD to him. How interesting day Sam had this day!