Subject: My Favorite FestivalFrom: Wang Kun
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The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival to the Chinese people. Several days before the new year, we begin to prepare for it. My parents buy meat, fish and vegetables. Houses are cleaned up. On the eve of the new year, the whole family get together and have a big dinner. After the meal we watch “the Spring Evening” on TV until twelve o’clock. On the first day of the new year, each of us is dressed in new clothes. When meeting others outside, we say “Happy New Year” to each other. Wepay new year calls to friends and relatives. That day my parents and relatives give “Red-bags” (money) to us children. All of us have a great time.