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现在你的家乡是什么季节？天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都干什么？根据提示写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
winter, windy and cold, wear coats and scarves, in restaurants, in the park， have a good time
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My hometown is in winter now. It is windy and cold. A lot of people don't think it is good weather. However,people who live in my hometown think winter is a good season. We can wear coats and scarves. And in restaurants, we have dinner. If we aren't afraid of cold. We can go to the park doing something. All in all, we can have a good time in my hometown.
