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现在你的家乡是什么季节？天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都干什么？根据提示写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
winter, windy and cold, wear coats and scarves, in restaurants, in the park， have a good time
正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达不够丰富，同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。
It's winter herenow. The weather is windy and cold. People are wearing coats and scarves. But everyone is having a good te. Friends are eating or drinking in the restaurants. In the park, some young people are singing and dancing. Some boys are playing soccer. One man taing some photos.
