七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

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Sam go to bed at 6 o'clock and ride bickle to spark yesterday. He was very happy in spark. He and his parents had lunch in McDonld's. since Pm 4 till Pm 6, Sam and his classmate had played basketball in their school. After dinner, Sam and his father went for a walk. His father had buy a classic music CD for him. How funy day was that day for Sam!