小学一年级英语作文:My dog

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳；连词使用偏少。

When I was a child, I really want a pet, like ducks, rabbits, cats, dogs, even a pig！ Finally, my parents bought me a puppy as my birthday gift. I really love it, it was really lovely. When I was tired, it always made me happy. I take it for a walk every evening. I was very happy when we get together. In a word, pets can bring us a lot of fun, they are important to us.