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Some people's eyes aren't good. They usually can't see anything clearly. How to protect our eyes? This problem isn't hard.First, don't use the computer or watch TV long time.It is very important. And you can eat some food to protect your eyes, like carrots and fish. And you can look at something in green.If you follow my advice, I believe you can have good eyes.