希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是学术词汇的积累;简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
Our eyes are very important.We can see many beautiful things with our eyes.Without eyes the life will get dark.So we must protect our eyes. We can stop for a while to let our eyes have a rest.During these time,we can enjoy the hills,flowers,trees.Then we shouldn't read books under the strong lights or weak lights.It's bad for our eyes.At last,we should keep doing the eye exercise. Let's protect our eyes,see more beautiful things.