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Hello.My name is Lucy King,I am from the UK,so I can speak English very well.I am 13.I like sports,music,movies.I want to find a Chinese pen pal who has the same hobbies.I like China,I also want to know more about China and study Chinese find the pen pal.If you want to be my pen pal,please call me.Thank you.