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单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；错误句子较少，可适当增加一些复杂句的使用；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Hello.My name is Lucy King,I am from the UK,so I can speak English very well.I am 13.I like sports,music,movies.I want to discover a pen pal from China who has the same hobbies.I like China,I also want to know more about China and study Chinese from the pen pal.If you want to be my pen pal,please call me.Thank you.
