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单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Hello.My name is Lucy King,I am from the UK,so I can speak English very well.I am 13.I like sports,music and films.I want to discover a pen pal from China who has the same hobbies.I like Chinaso I want to know more about China and study Chinese from the pen pal.If you want to be my pen pal,please call me.Thank you.
