七年级英语下册Unit10 单元测试试卷作文附范文:My Busy Day

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My busy day I had a busy day yesterday.First at 10:00a.m,I was finishing my homework in my room.Then at 12:00a.m,I was practising the piano in the living room,I played it well.Next at 3:00p.m,I was doing the housework with my parents,we sweept the floor and washed the clothes.At 4:00p.m,I was shopping with my mother,we bought a lot of things. What a busy day!