七年级英语下册Unit10 单元测试试卷作文附范文:My Busy Day

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My busy day I had a busy day yesterday.First ,I finished my homework in my room.Then ,I practised the piano in the living room,and I played it well.Next,I did the housework with my parents,we sweept the floor and washed the clothes.At 4:00p.m,I went shopping with my mother,we bought a lot of things. What a busy day!