七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

Yesterday Sam got up at 6 o'clock . Then he went to the park by bike and he felt very happy. He had lunch with his parents in McDonald's at noon. In the afternoon Sam played basketbaoo with his classmates from 4pm to 6 pm. After supper, Sam and his father went for a walk together and Sam' daddy bought him a old fashion music. What an interesting day!