七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

从句偏少，建议平时练习中加大单词的记忆；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，注意文中少数拼写错误；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Yesterday,sam gets up at six o'clock.Then he rides a bike go to park.He has fun in the park.At noon,he and his parents ate lunch in McDonald’s.Afternoon,sam and his students play the basketball, in the afternoon four o'clock until six o'clock.Dinner,sam and his father go for a walk,his father buyes a classical music get to him.This a day is very fun.