七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；文中从句数量过少；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Yesterday,sam gets up at six o'clock.Then he rides a bike go to park.He has fun in the park.At noon,he and his parents ate lunch in McDonald’s. In the afternoon,sam and his students play the basketball, in the afternoon four o'clock until six o'clock.Dinner,sam and his father go for a walk,his father buys a classical music get to him.This a day is very fun.