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As a pupil, Below are Tom's rules which establishing by his parents. Tom nee to do it from Monday to Friday and there is no exception. First, Tom need get up early. He must get up at 6:15 and go to school at 6:15. second, on the way to school, he can't listen to music on school days and don't allowed to eat outside. third, Tom cant watch Tv on school nights. He need do his homework in these days. last but is the most important, Tom must bake home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening. what a boring rule Tom has to obye.