正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累;学术词汇的使用希望还能更熟练一些,拼写检查还需加强;连词使用偏少。
I am a pupil in liuxi primary school. I am in calss 2,grade 3. Liming is our monitor, He is tall and thin. since short sight he always wears a pair of glasse.He has a road face wiht big eyes. his hair is black and short. He always wears black pants and white T-shirt. He likes to help others who in trouble. he gets to school very early everyday. he doing well for his position. we all like him.