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句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；作者能词汇表达较准确熟练，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写；可以适当增加副词的使用。
Hello, My name is Lucy King, King is my last name, Lucy is my first name, you can call me Lucy. I am 13 years old girl from UK. I am writting to make a pen pal friends via writing letters. My language is English. I want to make a friends who from China and can speak Chinese. I like China and apprecitae Chinese culture and history. My hobbies are sports, music and movies. In my lesiure time, I always play basketall with my friends in the playground. if you have same hobbies, please send a letter to me. my address is No.3 street. liu Avene, UK; looking forward to hear from you.
