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My favorite move is “Transformers 4". I like this move becuse I like Optimas Prime and bumbee.(they are two important reles in this movie). they are not only brave but also kindness. In the movie of Tranformers 4, "Automobiles, transform and roll out" -this words from automobiles learder -Optiams often make me moved and excited. In spite of the human being cheated transformers again and again. tranformers are still helps human as always, which deeds make me moved. I also like another charactors- Lockdown, although he is a bad guy, unexpectedly, he is a so handsome and so cool guy. As you know, His face can transfer a weapon to attach the target and his talking always makes audience laugh. According to the China daily's report, Transformer 5 will be on scren in 2015. I looking forward to see it very soon.
