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初一英语作文模拟题:保护眼睛

发布时间:2013-05-16 15:04浏览次数:2457
要求:
以“如何保护我们的眼睛 How To Protect Our Eyes ”为主题写一篇作文。
要求句子通顺,语法正确,卷面干净,书写规范。
要求不少于60个单词。
用户的作文(系统评分67.0分
评语:

全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;能够使用一些不错的从句;文中词汇表达较为多样,但请认真检查词汇的拼写。

用户练习作文:

As a Chinese goes saying, "Eyes is a window for human's heart." wihtout eyes, we will in terrible dark and can't see anything. therefore, protect our eyes is an essential thing in our life. But how to protect our eyes? accoring to latest technology 's reseach, there are three basic rules we must to do if we want to protect our eyes. Firstly, we can't read a book long time. we need to have a rest for a while after we read books 30 minutes ago. secondly, we can't watch Tv or play Ipad too often, It will affect our eyesight and let us with short sight. Especially for children, parents need to control the playing time for their children. Thirdly, we try not to read books in the dark light. reading in Dark light, most of people know this, it will harm to our eyes without doubt. Last but not least, please always remind youself protect eyes is a very importan thing while you reading, watching and playing games in your daily life.

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