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Dear George, How are you? Do you remember that you asked me about the situation of household hotels here the last time?You said that you want to spend a holiday here so that you asked me to tell you something about here. And now, I will give you the information that all I know and these things may help you. Firstly,the expense of this hotel is very cheap. The single room is 30 yuan and the double room is 20 yuan per day. You can have hearty meals with the host-es and that just costs 20 yuan per day.There also has menus that prepared for you to let you choose the varied food.Of course,if you don't want to do so,you can also make lunch by yourself. Besides,you can enjoy bathing in the sea,swimming and climbing the mountains.You can also work in greenhouse without reward if you would like to do these things. As far as I concerned,doing these things makes you know more about China,and actually,makes you in a friendly atmosphere. I am looking forward to you. Your friend, LiHua