作者词汇量积累很好,学术词汇积累要重视;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
Hello, Everyone! Today,I will introduce a movie named《Millions of pounds》to you. It was written by Mark Twain.This movie tells us a story about a poor person's adventure in London. The young man who is poor is so lucky that he meets two old men who give him a check and he doesn't need to do anything for them. He doesn't know this is a bet.Actually, the two millionaires just want to see what he will do in a month.But to their surprise,not only does Henry st-rave to death ,but also he becomes a man who is wealthy.What's more,a beautiful rich girl has fallen in love with Henry. Using humorous and ironical language,MarkTwain successfully shows us the society then.Hope you like it. Thank you.