高一英语作文模拟题:关于汽车

作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

Hello, everyone! With the development of society,more and more people become wealthy.As a result,there are too many cars in the streets and people who want to cross the streets must be in danger.Because of our carelessness,the aerosols now are more serious..So it is important for us to control the number of cars. But people's view on this problem vary from person to person.Some hold that we should drive cars because cars is just a vehicle that can make us more comfortable and convenient.It also shows that our people is wealthy and our country is strong enough. What's more,it can influence other industries develop quickly. However,others believe that driving car makes our atmosphere seriously be broken.In fact, the air pollution is becoming serious and too many cars may cause traffic jams.There will be more accidents.Besides,the parking problem now is becoming serious.We must try to solve this problem. What do you think about it?