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Tom's rules I have a friend.His name is Tom. He is a designed boy. He always get up at 6:00. And he go to school with me at 6:15.He is healthy. Because he never eat outside.He don't listen to music on school days and don't watch TV on school nights. He is back home by 12:00 in morning and by 9:20 in the evening.It is Tom's rules.