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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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From:hubin@163.com To:KPOHsales@hotmail.com I'm learn from a new production named 5670 in your company during the exhibition which I jion in newyork from Dec.15th to 22th .I'm interested it very much. please send us a price list and instruction about it . thanks very much and hope we can establish business relationship.
