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Chengdu is home to delicious food . There are many restaurants that offer a lot of quality food , Even so ,I still prefer to eat at home . Let me tell you the reasons. First, the food we ear at home is cleaner and safer.Besides ,I t is well-known to all thateating at home doesn’t cost thatmuch, Finally, it helps family members becomes closer, because preparing food at home is not only fun, but also encourages more communications in the house.