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I'm 13 years old and I come from the UK.I can speak English and I want to learn Chinese.Because I think it's interesting what's more useful.I have many hobbies,sports,music and movies.For sports,I like playing tennis,ping-pong,basketball,volleyball.For music,I like top music very well and I like playing the piano and the violin.I want to be a musician.For movies,I like funny movies very much.