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A memo to Mary Chen Dear Mary, I'm Li Ming and I have to on a business ship to Beijing for one week,so I can't discuss something about the New Year's party with yourselves. It's time for you to make decisions about the time the place and repare to everyone.Thanks a lot. Your sincerely,Li Ming.