小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a dog.His name is DU DU.DU DU is extremely fat.He has white ears and black eyes.He is nine years old now.I also playing football with him after I finish my homework. He is my good friend and I love my dog very much.Do you like my dog?Do you like my dog?