初中英语命题作文真题演练(89):生活离不开水

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Life without water As we known all the living things in the world without water,water become more and more important to our daily life.You can see clean river in the past,but now the amount of water suitable to drink is diminishing.The pollution is serous.IN my opinion everyone of us should preotect the water resources.The reuse of water resource is a good way to workout with it.We should pay attention to it.