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Refer the attached report and e-mail cooperated with WTC, I have confusion in working date, who conduct the service? WTC or LSHM engineer? Haijian sent E-mail ask support in 5 Aug, WTC feedback the result of troubleshooting and service charge in 8 Aug. Your report mentioned our service engineer on board service in 6 Aug. Why WTC ask us for service charge payment? Please clarify.