正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者词汇量偏少,不过单词拼写方面做的不错;语言不流畅;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
My name is Sam.I am twenty-four years old.I am got up at six o'clock tomorrow.I am by bike went to park.I am very happy in the park. My parents with me eat humburger at McDonald’s at noon. I and my classmate played basketball from four o'clock to six o'clock in the afternoon. After dinner, I and my father went for a walk together. My father give me a classical music CD. I am felt interesting at that day.