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Sam got up at six yesterday then he rode a bike to the park. He had a good time at the park. He ate lunch at McDonald's with his parents. In the afternoon, he played basketball with his classmates from four o'clock to six o'clock at school. After supper, he went for a walk with his father and his father bought him a CD of classical music. What an interesting day Sam spent.
