七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

Sam got up at 6:00 yesterday.Then rode a bike to park ,he haved great time at the park .In the noon he ate lunch in the McDonald’s with his parents.In the afternoon he played basketball with his classmates in the school ,from4:00 pm to 6:00 pm.After dinner sam went for a walk with father,his father brought a music CD.Sam have great time on this day.