湖北洪湖市2012-2013学年七年级上学期期中考试英语作文及范文:我的班长

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my monitor is very tall,and celver.he is a friendly boy.so h has a few friends .he name is mark .he is 14 he has a short hair ,a samll mouth ,and a big eyes .he always wears a blue t-shirt,a white jeans .i think he is a good mpnitor ,because he is very interisted .we all like him .