雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

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The diagram illustrates the proportion of fast food, which are hamburgers, pizza, french fries, fried chicken , tacos and sushi are ate by the youth in the usa. From the chart, it can be easy to see that the percentage of hamburgers was 33%, which ranks the first; The next was that of pizza, constituting 26%; Followed by that of french fries, was 22%. Compared with that, the proportion of fried chicken was little different from that of tacos, the former was 9% and the later was 7%. In addition, the percentage of Sushi occupied the smallest part, just over 3%. In conclusion, Hamburgers took up the largest part, which was the most popular fast food for the youth of America. The second largest part was pizza.