2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

作者词汇基础很好，也能较灵活使用学术词汇，望继续努力；句式变化较为明显，可适当增加从句的使用；全文结构较为严谨。

In recent years, with the development of technology and economy there is more and more people are going to have better life than better. However, the quality of life in big cities is decreasing. What I hold is that due to various pollutions,like air pollution and water pollution. In addition, the pressure they got from society occupied the main position as well. In the following I will give my opinion about that. Fist of all, because of the factory which were be built in metropolitan, they have great bad influence on the city. Especially the carbon dioxide and swage, Which can not only cause the global warming to pose a threat to people's life but also destroy the environment for living. For example, the park is a good place for people to relax. Because they are so busy with their work that they are under intense stress. Having walk or doing exercise in the park is a good way for they to release pressure and improve the physical health. Unfortunately, due to the air pollution and waste water come from factory the trees become withered, the purity river cannot see and the nature sound cannot be heard any more. Therefore people have to stay at home to watch TV or playing computer games or listening to the music to have a break. Next, due to the huge pressure people got from work they have to work day by day and even overnight to finish their job. It really has enormous effect on their health. Under the situation, they will probably take serious ill, like stomach, headache, depressive disorder and so on. To solve the problem, we have to take actions immediately. The government should rise the people's awareness of protecting environment, like plan trees, control or even reduce the amount of factory, limit the number of private cars and so on. In addition, persist to explore the new environmentally technology to replace the original one. People also have to learn how to release the pressure by themselves, like go to gym to do exercises, travel to other part of country or world.