文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨;请注意分段。
My favorite sport is playing football, the reason i like it just by chance. One day, i picked up a football when i went home, then i played football with my friends. Since it i deeply loved playing football. I often train and compete with my classmates. One of the football stars who I love is b,and my best wish is to become a professional football player.