高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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Hello,I am a student of No.1 senior high school.Though I am a girl ,I like piaying football.It is my favourite sport.By the way,A special chance let me fall in love with playing football.That day was the important day. I picked up a football in my way home.Then my friends and I played football together.So l love playing football in creazying.So far I am always piay football with my classmates,and we are traned and entered race together,too. My dream is become a professional football player,and my favourite football star is Backham in the UK.