高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

文中词汇表达多样性不足，在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

Hello,I am a student of No.1 senior high school.Though I am a girl,I like playing football.It is my favourite sport. By the way,A special chance lets me fall in love with playing football.That day was the important day. I picked up a football on my way home.Then my friends and I played football together.So l love playing football in crazing.So far I always play football with my classmates,and we are trained and entered race together,too. My dream becomes a professional football player,and my favourite football star is Backham in the UK.