作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达,但词汇拼写要更加认真。
Playing football is My favorite sport, and I fell in love it only by a chance. One day, I found a football on my way home, I was so curious that I began to play it with my friends. Form then on I often play football with my chassmates after class. We often train oursleves. In order to improve our skills, we compete in football games sometimes. One of the football stars who I love is Beckham . It is not his handsome appearance but his skills. My dream is to become a professional football player in the furture.