正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;文中用词稍显贫乏,在词汇拼写也要再接再厉。
Playing football is my favorite. I fell in love it by chance. One day, I found a football on my way home, I was so curious that I began to play it with my friends. Form then on I often play football with my classmates after class. We often train oursleves. In order to improve our skills, we compete in football games sometimes. One of the football stars who I love is Beckham . It is not his handsome appearance but his skills. My dream is to become a professional football player in the furture.