七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，注意文中少数拼写错误；文中从句使用量偏少；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

yesterday Sam got up at six o\\\'clock.Then went to the park by bicycle.He enjoyed himself in the park.At noon ,he had lunch in the McDonald\\\'s with his parents.In the afternoon,he played basketball with his classmates in the school .From four o\\\'clock till six o\\\'clock.After supper,Sam and his parents went to for a walk,his father bought a classic CD for him.Sam had a wonderful day.